[WIP] SF Series - Confessions of a Counterfeit Man

[WIP] SF Series - Confessions of a Counterfeit Man

Postby Stuporstar » Wed May 03, 2017 3:57 am

I've been working on this series for a long long time, only now starting to actually finish my novels. I have a long way to go, but so far I've rough-drafted almost five novels out of six.

I'm finally working on a complete draft of the first novel, which I've reworked several times. Hoping this time I hit it the right way. The main character goes by the name Duran, and he's been genetically engineered, which would be revealed on the back cover and prologue (which isn't written yet). I'm curious about what people's impression will be having no more info than that going in.

So, this is a link to the first chapter: https://docs.google.com/document/d/10CS ... nTyr9uU2Mo

I'd like some feedback on pacing, whether the opening is enough of a hook or not, and any questions you have that feel like they need to be answered now before you can go on any further. I know too much about what's going on so I've developed blind spots about them.
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