[Gawain]

The moral of this installment: Just because the mark is small doesn't mean it's going to be an easy target.

Agreed - http://nationalreport.net/knockout-thug-loses-game-permanently-grannys-big-gun/

Drac: it's a thrilling story. Every time I think I can predict Arissi's next move you prove me wrong Thank you for that!

[Denina]

Love the latest installment. It was a good bit of writing, I was completely absorbed in the story and forgot everything else around me and pictured everything happening as written. I love it when stories do that. Can't wait for the next bit.

[Denina]

Damn, I was hoping against hope that you might be inspired and have a new installment this weekend. I know your installments usually take time but well, I'm impatient. *grin*

[Drac]

Not quite as fast as hoped-for, apparently, but still... 8{)}

[Denina]

Sooner than I hoped...more please...I can't wait to read about their next adventure. I'd never heard of such a creature as described in the story though...unless it's a lich?

[Drac]

No, not a lich... but we'll see what happens. Perhaps Arissi's companions can tell us more.

[Denina]

Drac, you're such a tease...I want to know who is noticing and what's going to happen. First post in 3 months and you leave me hanging like that?! You're a cruel, cruel man.

[Drac]

And what is next, is a question.

I am sorely tempted to retell the story, filling in a great deal of missing detail... almost a novel, after a fashion. It would still be Arissi, Dven, etc... but we'd have a lot more background filled-in, with more reasonable transitions t'ween chapters.

Thoughts, anyone?

[Denina]

I would love it! Write it! Please!

[Drac]

All right... the first entry is up; it's a bit shorter than episodes should tend to be, but reflects the newer style that I intend.

Thoughts?